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~Got hair, got lights,
got love, got sweat...
Got something in common,
just don't know what it is, yet.
Got my best suit on
And I brought you a rose,
I can't help but blush when you hold me so close...

And here it goes and it goes and it goes on and on.
I don't know what I know but I know there's something wrong.
...And I can't help but feel...
There's something very wrong

I know I'm not funny, charming or tall.
Still I wait by the phone just to answer your call.
Maybe we could go out again tonight?
Dance our worries away, It'll be all right...

And here it goes and it goes and it goes on and on.
I don't know what I know but I know there's something wrong.
...And I can't help but feel...
There's something very wrong

Time flies away,
Each minute a day,
Then a day's a year.
Sometime you'll cut me off, I fear.
We don't talk like the night we met,
A few more drinks and I'll be fine,
Don't you fret...

And here it goes and it goes and it goes on and on.
I don't know what I know but I hope that I'm wrong.
...And I can't help but wish...
That I couldn't be more wrong
This is a really rough idea for a song I've been writing lately, I have an acoustic recording of it, but it's really low quality and I don't eve know all of the words yet. :\
Ah well, I'll figure it out eventually.
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:iconlightbulb-101:
Lightbulb-101 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Good luck.
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Carlisle123 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
For what?
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:iconlightbulb-101:
Lightbulb-101 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
For completing the lyrics and working more on the rough acoustics.
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:iconcarlisle123:
Carlisle123 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks?
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Lightbulb-101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh just never mind. I'm not making very much sense lately.... >.>
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Carlisle123 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry about it. I still appreciate you.
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:iconlightbulb-101:
Lightbulb-101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Good to know somebody does. :)
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Carlisle123 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
YAY!
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blackarmsox Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
who made you think of it?
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Carlisle123 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It was just going through my head; I started writing it a while ago.
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